There have been some updates on arigni.co.uk
The screen snippets were originally photographs of sections of the script printout. They were OK but I decided it would be much better to have them coded into the html and formatted to screenplay conventions. It makes them more readable on different viewing formats and means I can swap them around from time to time.
I have also been busy doing a fresh redrafting of the first episode following some helpful notes received from Mere Walton. In particular, she pointed out that I was — in my inexperience and naivety — emulating many conventions from produced scripts that are out of place in a spec script. Well, you live and learn. So changes are being made.
Another change is a very slight rewording of the main logline which now reads: “A sheltered innocent holidaying abroad must be reunited with two lost duffel bags at all costs — since the consequences of failure are unthinkable.”